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Here I am
its my last chance
to set things right
too bad everything thing that can has gone wrong

Im constantly trying to get myself noticed
its only natural for a guy like me
to like a girl like you

The moment of Fate
My timer's tickin down

I cant wait
to wipe off my slate

and come clean to you
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My poetry has gone from okay,
to bad
to worse
to pathetic..

to the point where i could eat alphabet soup and crap out better poetry..

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:iconpermanent-insanity:
:) its not bad

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"I'm not crazy cause I take the right pills every day" - Jimmy Eat World, Bleed American
:iconjirayiasensai:
eh.. its just one of those scribbles on the back of my world geo notebook..

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I believe that there is no good and no evil,
because those are two words made from the perspective of one person,
and shared with others.
:iconpermanent-insanity:
scribbles can be good :)
I write random crap in my notebooks all the time

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~Lyrics-Community
"I'm not crazy cause I take the right pills every day" - Jimmy Eat World, Bleed American
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like very light diet jimmy eat world
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no no, this is really really good. So, whose the lucky girl you want to notice u? ^_^

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:iconjirayiasensai:
lol.. i guess you can put it that way..

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I believe that there is no good and no evil,
because those are two words made from the perspective of one person,
and shared with others.
:iconjirayiasensai:
oh just someone ^-^

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I believe that there is no good and no evil,
because those are two words made from the perspective of one person,
and shared with others.
:iconlife-0r-death:
come, tell me. Pwease? You can note me so no one else can know. ^-^

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Contest by WargusEstor.
Theme: Darkness in my Soul

Please join this contest. You may win 1st place for some spectacular things. Also, it would be fun to do. ^_^
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its more of a bad romance film. and no one that anyone on dA knows of.

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I believe that there is no good and no evil,
because those are two words made from the perspective of one person,
and shared with others.

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